I believe what you posted was very reasonable. However, what about this? what if you composed a catchier post title? I ain’t saying your information is not good, but what if you added a post title that grabbed people’s attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little vanilla. You should glance at Yahoo’s front page and watch how they create post headlines to grab people to click. You might add a video or a pic or two to grab readers excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it could bring your blog a little bit more interesting.

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